Plot to our opening

We have decided to base our film on the theme of 'The Candy Man', using a character similar to the Grudge.

The plot is;

A few friends are having a gathering, they are in one of the friends bedroom that contains large mirrors. One of the girls then stares into the mirror, suddenly experiencing a frightening flashback of the ghost Saskia. She then jumps with shock and gets the attention of her friends, she then gets asked what that was all about, and she then explains to them, the mirrors creep her out because she once called upon a ghost by chanting the words "Saskia, Saskia, Where is Saskia?" which she never thought would of happened. Her friends don't believe her and start to joke about, laughing at her, causing her to leave. Once she has left, the reamining two take the joke even further and actually try out what their friend was telling them, they still don't believe anything would happen, so they jokingly chant the words "Saskia, Saskia, Where is Saskia?" After this has been said, strange things start to happen within the room, lights turn off, doors slam, blinds rattle and they get frightened and panic, not knowing what is going on. All of a sudden things quiet down, and out of no-where a groaning sound is heard by them, they start to panic more, screaming, and then one of them gets out a torch on her phone, panning it around the darkened room, looking for where the groaning is coming from, once she has then turned the phone to face the underneath of the bed, a mysterious, dead looking girl is there, staring at them, crawling to get out. The two of them make a run for it, heading for the door, but it's locked. The ghost then lifts up her head as she crawls towards them, revealing her pale face, and screams unexpectedly.